~An Attempt at Saneness (Swallowtail)

[ashleyy]

Cinderpaw[/size]

White paws flashed against the pine needle covered floor of the ThunderClan camp. Yellow eyes flashed an almost golden as a stray ray of sunshine reflected off of them and the kit's maw was pulled back in what could only be seen as a smile. The small tortoise shell she-cat had just recently became six moons old, which meant that her world was about to change. Finally no more nursery den with her little siblings, not that she wasn't thankful for them....but it was weird being older then your siblings. But not too many of the others realized that because Cinderkit was about the same size as the kits that were a month or two younger then her.
A million and one thoughts were flashing through the young she-cats mind as she glanced around for her beautiful black and white mother. Cinderkit was dying to tell her the good news and she felt like she could jump out of her pelt with the excitment. As she grew closer to the nursery that she would soon be able to move out of her excitment grew even more. Reaching the entrance of the nursery den the kit tried to stop but couldn't stop running fast enough and her front paws wound up behind her back ones and the little tortoise shell kit went tumbling through the entrance and right into her mother.

[/color]"Mouse dung!!" Realizing what she just said in front of her mother the kits ears flattened ashamadly back against her head and she lowered her maw to the ground mumbling a quick apology before the excitment bubbled back over and she bounced to her feet, her eyes lit up with joy and her chest puffed out with pride. "I'm going to be an apprentice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Tag-Swallowtail<3
Word Count-293
Notes- I'm trying to figure her out still<3
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[anne ⎈]

The day was cool, almost perfect as the slight breeze ruffled Swallowtail's white chest. It kind of bugged her though, her fur being all over the place and such, so she cleaned her fur down so it stayed in place. She got up from her next to go check on her two little ones that were playing outside, hoping they weren't getting into too much trouble, but instead of finding the kits, Cinderkit ran up and found her. Her not-so-litte kitten practically knocked her to the ground.
"Mouse Dung!"
Her head jolted up, bringing her body with her as soon as she heard the foul words come from the mouth of her foster kit. Sure she was excited and such, but those kinds of words are not very well tolerated with Swallowtail. Even she does not use those words.
"Excuse me, young lady? Did I just hear what I think I heard?"
She stared intently at Cinderkit. She was soon to be adding a 'paw' to the end of her name, so she figured she should start treating a bit more harder, who knows what kind of mentor she could get? He or she may be a lot more stricter when it comes to respect..
It didn't feel right to Swallowtail though. Cinderkit was her baby. She would always love her and be there for her and always give her encouraging words.
"Nevermind that, love, accidents happen. And I know you are going to be an apprentice, it saddens me that you are going to leave, but also happy because I know you have been looking forward to this day, and now it's finally here."

words ; 273
ooc ; crappy post. :c

[ashleyy]

Cinderpaw

The tortiseshell kitten licked at her white chest as her mother scolded her for her foul language. The excitment faded slightly as she realized she wasn't too happy with her and that the days of being a kitten that could do no wrong were qickly fading away. But then Swallowtail's mood shifted and she excused the foul language.
Cinderpaw looked up midlick and her yellowy eyes widened slightly as she realized she wasn't going to get in trouble.
Excitment bubbled back up inside of her as her mother continued to speak and the kit-soon-to-be-apprentice had to bite her sandpaper tounge to keep from interrupting her mother. Her white paws twitched as she extended and contracted her sharp nails from her pads in an attempt to stay still. Swallowtail had to realize how much it was killing Cinderpaw to not be bouncing around outside and she was dying to know who her mentor was.
Dragging her attention back to Swallowtail, Cinderpaw realized that she had finished talking and seemed to be waiting for a response. Great... The little she-cat turned her yellow eyes back to the black and white adult's and spoke excitedly. "Who do you think my mentor will be??" Cinderpaw could feel her eyes light up at the thought of the different mentors she could have, and how much they would teach her!

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Tag-Swallowtail<3
Words-221
Notes- Blahhhhhhhhhhhhhh soooo badddd.

[anne ⎈]

* swallowtail -

^{Swallowtail chuckled as Cinderpaw was practically combining all of her words together with her excitement, she was so proud of her daughter. To go from an outsider foster child to being able to get to be an apprentice was bliss for the queen.
When she heard Cinderpaw ask who her mentor would be she simply looked around and smiled, "Hmm.. I haven't the slightest idea." She looked back down at her foster daughter and winked. She knew exactly who her mentor was going to be, but she wanted to keep it a surprise from the almost-apprentice that Ebonyleaf was the mentor-to-be.
The queen was worried. Ebonyleaf seemed like the worst match for Cinderpaw. She had nothing against her fellow she-cat, but the fact she was so blunt and she's noticed she tells the ugly truth almost as mean as she could, and she just hopes the warrior won't hurt Cinderpaw's feelings or worse. Tells her she could never be a warrior because she knows her daughter could do anything she wants to do if she has support.}

^{words ; 175 :C
ooc ; sorry for the lack of words. </3}